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Draft Three

In Muffin, Screenwriting on January 25, 2009 at 1:31 pm

It is better than previous drafts, still imperfect. Here it is:


Draft Three

In Muffin, Screenwriting on January 22, 2009 at 1:38 pm

I’m working on it now, based on a buttload of edits and what have you, including rearranging scenes. It’s actually really good, as it gives me the opportunity to basically reword a lot of scenes. Maybe I am improving on them? We’ll see. Anyway, it may also be shorter than the second draft, which was something of an abomination.

How did the reading go today?

In Muffin, Screenwriting on January 17, 2009 at 8:06 pm

I am definitely the wrong person to ask. If you ever want to make a writer feel terrible about him/herself, read his/her work out loud. It doesn’t matter how great the actors are (we have some really good actors), everything just always sounds wrong. Yikes. Ask Alorah and Eric.

This is what I was referring to in that one scene

In Muffin, Saved by the Bell, Screenwriting on January 16, 2009 at 9:54 pm

This is what I’m referring to in that other scene

In Muffin, Screenwriting on January 16, 2009 at 8:57 pm

This is to explain something in the second draft of the script

In Me teaching you shit, Muffin, Screenwriting on January 16, 2009 at 7:53 pm

Scriptwriting = Hard Work?

In Muffin, Screenwriting on January 16, 2009 at 5:06 am
God, what a hero

Hey, my name’s Muffin, I’m the guy who’s writing this thing. I’ll try to use my posts in this blog to give you insight into what’s going on with the script and stuff. I don’t have a ton of time at this moment, as I’m currently watching some of last season’s LOST (to get myself tumescent for this coming season) and trying superhard to get the second draft done. The first draft was written over the course of about a month, with stuff added in three states and on an airplane. Portions of the first and second draft were written while I was watching old episodes of TWO AND A HALF MEN. Does it show? If you haven’t read the first draft yet, you can check it out here. It’s not my finest work by any means, but I’m very happy with how the second draft is coming along, especially how much longer it is. Keep an eye on this space, I think. Okay?